Is your cold call script technically fine — but somehow not converting the way it should?

Have you noticed prospects going quiet, giving polite brush-offs, or ending calls faster than you'd like — and you're not sure which part of the call is losing them?

Does your script feel generic — like it could belong to any company, rather than genuinely uncovering what your specific prospects need?

Do you think it would help to know what's actually working in successful sales teams right now, rather than relying on scripts and tactics that stopped working years ago? That's exactly what I bring.

With over 20 years in sales and over 10 of those training teams, I combine that experience with an MPhil in Applied Linguistics from Cambridge — a genuine love of language and how it persuades, and an eye for exactly why some phrasing lands and other phrasing doesn't.

I rebuild cold call scripts around a proven questioning structure, so your calls earn real answers instead of polite small talk. You'll get a rewritten script plus notes explaining exactly why each change strengthens it — and every order includes a free bonus one-page Delivery & Tonality guide, with practical tips on pacing, tone, and mindset that add extra polish alongside your script.

Honestly? There's nothing quite like the joy of seeing a script come together well. If I can help bring that experience to your calls, I'd love the chance.

My Guarantee: Basic orders delivered within 48 hours; Standard and Premium within 72 hours. One written revision is included — send your feedback in writing after delivery, and I'll return an updated version within 72 hours.

What I need from you: Your current script (or a rough description of what you currently say) plus a line on who you're calling and why. This covers script writing and review only — no live calls, no ongoing coaching sessions.

If you're looking for support beyond a single script — training for a wider team, or ongoing script development — feel free to message me to discuss what might work.